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Oh, hi. How are you? What's been going
on? You having a good day?
>> Keeping busy, lots of things to think
about, bit stressed over sex and things
like that. Okay. Well, I'm glad you
came. You know, it's a pretty hard time
of year to be able to turn up to these
kind of events. Um, and it's great to
see so many of you here. um because I
know that a lot of you are under that
kind of stress of sachs. There are a lot
of sacks at the moment and I talked to a
lot of you privately as a student
manager and and we're a lot of you are
worried right now and that's good. Um
which is why today's session is designed
to be really productive and really
positive and really driven to give you
something that's going to be useful on
Tuesday. Okay, so that's our purpose
today. Now, as always with these sessions,
sessions,
um the basic rules of respect apply. Um
you are here, as painful as sometimes it
might be for you, to listen to us, and
we are not here to listen to you. So,
it's a bit of a one-way relationship
today. Um so, I do ask that you are
super respectful of every panel member
today. It's totally appropriate to put
your hand up and ask a question. it's
completely reasonable to stay back
afterwards to ask some follow-up
questions, and a few of us will stick
around to do that. Um, but when the
panel is talking, it is being recorded.
We've got some new mics here, which I'm
guessing are more sensitive, so they're
going to pick up more ambient sound if
you're whispering and talking,
especially if you're right next to a
microphone that's got a sorry, camera
that's got a big microphone on it. Um,
so please just try to be respectful of
that. Um, there will be times during the
session where I'll stick a timer on,
you'll start planning out a topic
together, and you'll be able to talk to
each other. they're great, they're fun,
the energy gets really high, and then I
got to bring it back down again. And so,
please just help me do that. And if you
hit a point during this lecture where
you're like, actually, I need to go for
some reason. If you think you're going
to leave early, I'd ask you to move now
to that side of the room so that you can
leave quietly without being disruptive.
Um, but if you do find yourself in a
place where you're like, actually, this
isn't working for me right now. I find
myself just talking to people around me
instead. Um, I would urge you to
reconsider staying under those
circumstances because it will be
disruptive to the people around you. Um,
and like I said, we're all a little bit
stressed or you're a little bit stressed
at the moment and that's a time when we
can kind of lose sight of that. And so,
let's try to maintain that that high
level of respect and kind of kindness to
each other. Um, cuz it'll probably work
out better for everybody. Um, with that
said, let's get started. Welcome to the
Born a Crime action-packed topic
unpacking lecture. Woo.
Woo.
So, I thought we might need a boost. So,
what I went with this year for the last
lecture of the year is the last lecture
in our series, I think. Um, is something
to try a little bit fun. So, I know that
um Born a Crime is a text that's driven
a lot by pop culture references. So, I
thought, hell, my favorite pop culture
references are movies from the ' 80s
about action. So, we're doing action
movies today. It's every action star
that I love from my childhood. And we're
going to enjoy them together as we
answer some complex topics on Born a Crime.
Crime.
So, um we're not going to do like an
introducing the panel today. I'm going
to let you introduce yourselves as you
talk later on because we actually have a
lot of teachers with us today. We've got
nine teachers um who are presenting
today, which is quite a few voices. Um
which is really important to remember. A
really big part of these sessions is
that you get to hear from someone other
than your teacher. So, when you hear
things today and you go, "Ah, that's not
what my teacher said." Um that doesn't
mean that what you heard today was
better. It doesn't mean that what you
heard today was worse. It just means
that what you heard today was different.
And different is usually good um because
it gives you a chance to have new
perspectives and new concepts especially
when it comes to argument ideas or
examples because we are fallible and
this book is 300 pages long and I can't
speak for every teach in the room but I
haven't done every page with my class
and you probably haven't either but
we've probably done some different
things along the way so it's good to
hear about those things in this kind of
a setting. Um so it's going to be a
really good experience if we work well
together. Let's give a big round of
applause to our first panel.
the victims as it were. Um, and before
we start, we do have some general tips
that we wanted to share with you
alongside some amazing sequences of my
favorite action movies. Points at home,
if you can name them. Um, there are a
few things that we think generally are
worth thinking about. Um, we think it's
really important when you're working
with a topic, if it's not a question,
maybe turning into a question be really
helpful to help you figure out how you
might take it. Also, doing some
rephrasing can be really useful. looking
having your dictionary with you, which
you should all bring to this sack, so
you can look up potential words that
relate to the topic that you're dealing
with that might help you see some
different ideas. Um, you have to have a
contention in your essay. You have to
have an overall answer to the question.
If it says, "Do you agree?" and you
don't tell us whether you agree or not,
that is a fundamental issue. If it says
discuss, and you don't talk about more
than one perspective, that's a
fundamental issue. Um, and if it says
how and you don't talk about the ways
that the author has actually constructed
the text, that is a fundamental issue.
And so you do need to be thinking about
how you're actually going to answer
those particular questions.
Um, another point that we wanted to note
here is that there are lots of different
ways of answering questions. You're
going to see lots of different
approaches today. Whether it's the
causes, consequences, exceptions
approach or the societal personal
interpersonal approach or the part one,
part two, part three of the book
approach, um, or the initially as
progresses ultimately approach or the
childhood, middleage, adulthood to some
extent approach. whatever approach you
choose, they are all valid and they all
work and they all have something in them
that is useful and you can mix and match
them as much as you like. Um because
that's kind of what makes this kind of
interesting and fun. And so even though
you might hear particular structures
today from particular teachers, that
doesn't mean it's the only way to do it.
Doesn't even necessarily mean it's the
best way for you to do it. Um there are
lots of ways to do this. And a big part
of the next few weeks for you is
figuring out a way that's going to work
for you. Um and that's what we want you
kind of really being exposed to today.
Um, and the last point that I'll note
before we move on is don't just answer a
topic, interrogate it. Ask, well, what
if not? Or what's another way of
thinking about it? Or how can I
challenge this in some way? You know, if
if the topics, you know, Trevor Noah
says racism is bad, which let's be
honest, is not a topic we're going to
give you. That's probably a little bit
too simplistic. Um, but it's really easy
for us to go, okay, well, can I argue
that there's some aspects of it that
were beneficial in some way or there was
some way of thinking about it that had
some aspect to it that might be
interestingly different. Maybe not
beneficial, that might be the wrong
word. Um,
>> yeah, we're definitely recording it. Um,
but something that shows a slightly
different take on it.
>> Maybe for something to fight back
against or to teach you how better to
think about not being racist. There you
go. That's a benefit. Um, all right,
let's do it. We're going to jump right
in with our first topic today. Our first
topic brought to you by Mel Gibson in
Braveheart. She was a rebel, refusing to
conform to ideas about what black people
did and didn't do. The willingness of
people to rebel against authority and
expectation drive Noah's memoir,
Disgust. Now, as always, I'm going to
give you a period of time that is
relatively random. Today, we're going to
go with 84 seconds. You have 84 seconds,
everyone in the room, to think about how
you might go about handling this topic.
>> If I have this [Music]
internalized racism.
You're so
>> 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
Before my panel starts, I will note that
like many topics you'll see today, this
one has a quote in it. And if you get a
quote in your topic, you do have an
obligation to try and find a way to
incorporate that quote in some way in
your response. Good thing to remember.
Take it away, panel.
>> Okay. Hi everyone. My name is Miss
Anton. I'd like to thank Mr. Hunt and
the the team for inviting me along. I'm
really honored and pleased to be here
and I wish you all the very best as you
navigate the last couple of months. I'm
sure you're going to do very well.
reading that quote, she was a rebel
refusing to conform to ideas about what
black people did and didn't do. That's a
direct reference to Patricia, who I
really love in this memoir, in this um text.
text.
Patricia, as we know, is a very
religious woman and she was guided by
God in her everyday life and saw him as
This is highlighted in chapter six
loopholes where Noah um highlights this
and therefore she contradicted or
ignored the laws of the land.
So Noah was guided by his mother's
normal sorry moral compass and rebel we
first see in chapter 2 born a crime
where she refuses to work in a factory
and take orders from a white lady all day.
day.
So immediately we are positioned to view
Patricia as an independent strong woman.
She cleverly enrolls in a secretarial
course. And lucky for her, the
government has decided to change its
policies because they're being
criticized um globally for their
apartheid, the the racist regime that
that that they're basically um expecting
people to follow.
um she chooses to leave her Soetto home
and moves to Johannesburg where where it
is illegal for black people to live. So
there's another rebel act sorry of hers.
She illegally participates in the
underground parties which I loved
reading. Um and she was a regular at
Hillbrow Hillbrow Tower, sorry, where
there's a revolving revolving dance
floor on the top floor and she's booging
the night away. love it.
So Noah elucidates that his mother
rejected the expectations placed upon
her as a woman and also as a black
person. From there on, she chooses to
have a union with the white man that she
chooses to spend her time with, a Swiss
German expat, Robert, and she says to
him, "I want a child. I want a kid." And
she basically forces him to have a a
child with no expectations placed on him.
him.
She says she wanted, sorry, Noah says
she wanted something that would love her
unconditionally in return. Page 63.
That's in chapter 5. And he says, I was
a product of her search for belonging.
So you can write so much with this
quote. I love Patricia and I think she's
um she's the best and she was a great
example for Noah. She raises him as a
white child, sends him to the best
schools that she possibly could,
constantly breaking the law. Um and so
on. So look into her. She's a very
strong character obviously and a key a
key part. But no is a product of her.
All the best. Thank you.
>> Well, you've got a lot of examples
there, so I might just give you like my
prompt breakdown just to make it a
little um quicker for both of us to go.
Um so, the way I looked at this, I I I
really focused maybe a little too much
on the drives Noah's memoir part of it.
Um, so I kind of thought quickly about
what drives um, somebody to rebel and
what that does. So I kind of came up
with an idea that this this I guess
desire or willingness to rebel um, is is
really a source of potential liberation
in the text. And that's kind of what
Patricia is pushing. There's an
individuality that can be established by
by rebellion. And she teaches that to
him. And rebellion doesn't have to be
just, you know, acts of against
authority or whatever, but other things.
So, I kind of I split that idea up into
three things. And one of them was sort
of this initial resistance of
classification against authority. All
right? So, you know, the text opens with
the the immorality act and that he's
he's illegal and they go through the
childhood where, you know, they're
they're um classified as mixed, colored,
black, you know, all these things. Those
are at the outset and and the resistance
of those ter the resistance of those uh
classifications are set up at the
beginning of the text and how the mother
also resisted those classifications as
much as she could throughout. Then I
looked at it like um the con confines of
one's environment. Okay. So, you might
be in these types of conditions, you
know, poor, um, no access to leave
areas, but she had a car, she moved, she
took him to different churches, you
know, so not letting the environment
drive their behavior or their decisions
or their um, you know, their their sort
of aspirations, right? So, those sort of
the first two ways I kind of thought of
it, but this this idea to liberate
oneself and not to let things hold them
down. And then finally, I kind of split
it up into um you know, the expectations
imposed upon you from the life that
you're supposed to have, don't be
limited by those. And I think that's a
central message that the the mother kind
of instilled in him. So it says
characters, which is a little bit of a
throw, the willingness of people. It's
really his mother in him and I guess his
dad to a degree, too. I mean, he did,
you know, go against that. Um, my my one
hang up with that is I'd have to design
the question around his his mother and
her, you know, sort of the way she did
all this and then how he did it as well
and how that informed him going forward.
Getting other people in the text, I
think, is a little trickier, but um, I'm
not saying it's impossible. All right,
I'll shut up now. Mr. Florence, you can go.
[Applause]
Um so I've sort of taken a little bit of
a similar approach and put together a
bastardized version of what both Miss
Anton and Mr. Papilicus have spoken
about. Um one thing that I've been
talking about with my class is that it
doesn't work for every single topic but
for a lot of these topics if you can go
in sort of being prepared to for your
first body paragraph just to be a bit of
an outline of here is the situation in
relation to the topic. And so for this
one it is here is South Africa in
relation to the topic. So that early on
he establishes that South Africa both
apartheid and post-aparttheide um was
this society where rebellion was
necessary uh to survive to function to
get food to get a job etc. people needed
to uh rebel um so I think if it doesn't
work for every topic but this is a bit
more broad ad uh advice for you. If you
can be ready with something like that,
um it might help you in the sack or the
exam. But that's going to be my first
body paragraph is that um essentially
wide authorities have established this
world and this system um where
restrictions are in place and um as Miss
Anton noted, Trevor's existence in
itself is an act of rebellion. Um so you
can talk about things on a very large
scale there. Um, and then what that
allows you to do is uh later on in the
essay talk about this notion that the
story of South Africa is sort of
reflected in the story of Trevor. He
tells both stories. They're intertwined
closely. Um, I would then probably move
on in the second party body paragraph to
move on to look largely at Patricia and
the way that she goes through those
social expectations. Um, so I actually
as soon as I read this quote, I was
trying to find it and I was like, "Mr.
Hunt, that's a typo. that quote's not
correct. It's not. It is correct. But
what I found is that there is a quote
that is almost identical um from a
different part of the section. Both are
talking about um Patricia on it's page 74.
74.
>> No, it's not the cat. I don't know what
the cat is. Um
>> the cat.
>> It's um page 73. My mom raised me as if
there were no limitations on where I
could go or what I could do. Sorry. She
refused to be bound by ridiculous ideas
of what black people couldn't or
shouldn't do. Like it's almost
identical, but it's from a different
section, but it clearly is um part of
this ongoing not motif, but narrative of
um her breaking these laws all the time.
Um so I'm going to be talking about that
this idea of she has that great quote.
It's on 74 as well. Um that even if he
knows the world, uh even sorry, if
that's all he sees, it will be enough.
He needs to know that the world is not
the ghetto. um she wants to show him
things of white people um as he puts it.
Um so talk about that social
expectation. If I'm trying to really
show off to an assessor, I'm going to
note that there's a bit of irony here
regarding Patricia that she is a rebel.
She is um socially disobedient, but at
the exact same time, she is incredibly
adherent to rules of Christianity. Um
she's really devout. Um she's constantly
arguing with Trevor about rules and how
we need to be following the rules of God
and Jesus, etc. yet when it comes to
other rules, rules that she views as
injust and wrong, um she is very willing
to go against them. And that's going to
be my final point that um ultimately
Trevor No is effectively saying that um
ultimately it's it's good and it's
healthy to question injustice and to
question things that aren't fair and to
question what's legally wrong or morally
wrong. um he's saying that it's a good
thing and he lives that and um we've
I've been encouraging my class where you
can to come back to his his main
messages to his western audience and I
think that's one thing that he's trying
to do is to encourage his western
audience um to question those things to
challenge injustice uh whether that be
something huge and big like apartheid
all the way down to not being able to
have communion um and that these are
yeah good things for an individual to do
that's it >> amazing
>> amazing [Applause]
Two final thoughts for me is just kind
of curious examples that might spark a
different idea. The two examples I'm
thinking of with this topic uh the
letters that Noah and Patricia passed to
each other when they were arguing as
like she was trying to instill certain
expectations in him and he rebels
against those pretty regularly and his
whole childhood is driven by I refused
to accept the kind of rules that my
mother was imposing on me as she was
refusing to accept the rules that were
imposed on her by society. And sorry on
that. Someone pointed out today that she
starts every single one of those letters
with a Bible verse. Yes,
>> that is her law. That is what she is not
willing to rebel against, but everything
else she is, whereas Trevor's almost converse,
converse,
>> which kind of illustrates that it's not
they're always they're all they're not
always willing to rebel against
authority. Sometimes they are
conforming, which allows for that kind
of different thought. The other one I
was thinking about was Robert's
restaurant. It's like a curious example
of an attempt to kind of rebel by doing
something different and authority
crushing you. And so there might be a
conversation around things like well
it's not just the willingness of people
to rebel um that drives memoir but also
the fact that it doesn't always work and
that sometimes it's unsuccessful and
>> Yeah, I know I'm not on the panel right
now but um just bouncing off what other
people have said. You were saying sorry
Mr. P has said maybe it's hard to
sometimes find examples beyond Patricia
and Trevor here. Um, and yes, that is
definitely difficult. I would also be
thinking about the education system. He
says that my mother taught me something
the school didn't teach teach, which is
how to think. And he fights back about
which class he gets put into, right? He
doesn't want to be in class B. So, I
would talk about the school system maybe
as one of the ways that they are
rebelling and that he makes a choice
about where he can go, who's smart,
who's not smart. But the other thing is
is that they um just from the sample um
from last year the in so having the the
like literally like the black market
right because there were certain things
that they were and were not allowed to
do and that is them rebelling against
authority by setting up their own
systems. So they're like we will survive
by doing this because you're not in
you're not enabling us or facilitating
us. So there are other ways like there
just may be people who are not named.
>> Yeah, that entrepreneurship start
everybody. I think it's time to change
places. Big round of applause for our
first panel.
>> Uh who was on the second panel? If you
know you're in the second panel, get on
up. Um Miss Hosking, Miss Dr. Dick.
>> I I am not Miss Spahu. I am in place of
Miss Spe. So this is convenient.
>> Go for it.
>> Look at all these.
Fantastic start. If you didn't take like
a page worth of notes, then you missed a trick.
trick.
>> I definitely heard at least six examples
that I'd kind of forgotten existed in
>> I'm pretty sure that it's um it's
Commando, I think. I think is it Commando?
Commando?
>> It's Schwarzenegger. And um the guy
think of the one who was in
me.
>> All right, here we go. Everybody ready?
We're getting distracted by the films. Um
Um
>> it's Predator.
>> Oh, it is Predator. It's the guy from Predator.
Predator.
It's Predator. Okay.
>> Over the top.
>> 3 2 1. Here we go. Our next topic
brought to us by Charlie's Angels. Uh is
which is really the 70s rather than the
80s. So I guess I lied. Uh women like to
be noticed. Don't just see me when you
need something. The experiences and
hardships of women are the heart of Noah
story of South Africa. Do you agree?
Emphasis on the phrase South Africa. Um
so this is a do you agree? So you got to
actually answer the question. Do you
agree? And as always with the good, do
you agree? The answer is usually to some
extent, but not completely. Um, and so
that's probably where you want to go as
a starting point. Uh, let's see. Let's
go with a 77 seconds. Your time starts now.
Heat. Heat. [Music]
Yeah. Heat.
Yeah. Heat.
All right, folks. I think we are ready
This is a more complicated topic than it
seems. Don't get fooled.
>> Um, this one's tough.
>> Oh, no.
>> So, uh, get ready to take some notes.
>> It is.
>> Jump on in.
>> Do you want to jump? I'll start, >> please.
>> please.
>> Great. Hi, everybody. I'm Mrs. Husking.
Lovely to see you all here. Your eager
faces just ready to learn more. It's so
wonderful. Um, so those in my class
today, hey, we we actually looked at
this one in class, but it was like a 7
minute quick run. Um, my initial thought
was what I had in class today
essentially. And I just kind of quickly
typed up some stuff in my notes. Um,
essentially my answer is, do you agree?
Absolutely. There is very little room, I
think, to disagree with something that
says women are the heart of the story
because Patricia and the the girls he
sort of likes and then loses and
ultimately even his, you know, his
grandmother, the women are the only real
visible people in Trevor's life. The men
are nowhere to be seen. They're either
violent or useless. So
she said she said,
>> um, so I find it's really important year
12, don't feel like you have to have an
exception just for the sake of it.
Sometimes it's really easy. And my easy
way out is to see a topic and go, "Yeah,
yeah, yeah, however." Right? Cuz it's
easy. It's beautiful. It's an extra.
It's another paragraph. So quick to do.
But with this one, you're going to
really tangle yourself up into knots
trying to go, "Yeah, but no, it's it's
also about Oh, no. It's what? What if
anything else apart tide apart tide is
the framework aparthe tide is the
foundation however I'm going to caution
you because I genuinely think that part
of Noah's message is to show us how the
personal is political right and how
these huge systems of patriarchy and
apartheid and capitalism they seem
almost like um god-given or or sort of
you know um immovable and Yet they're
actually these ridiculous, absurd little
stupid systems that are very quickly
dismantled with the right kind of
pressure. So I would hesitate to say,
"Oh, but it's also about apartheid and
racism and oppression." Yes, but the
women and their hardships and
experiences are the are the the the lens
through which we see this horrific
society. Okay. Um he bookends the whole
thing with Patricia, the
acknowledgements and the the dedication.
literally almost the exact same phrase
he uses. Every preface kind of links
back to her or history. Um, every single
vignette, every single little story,
it's like, "Oh, my mom did this, then I
did that. My mom said this, then I did
that." It's all about her. Honestly, it
is. If you've listened to any
interviews, everything he talks about
on, you know, the Tonight Show or the
Daily Show or whatever show he was
hosting for a while, he brings it back
to his mom. So it's not just Patricia,
it's the fact that women are the most
disadvantaged in South Africa in terms
of black women. Patricia being a black
woman. I would also discuss the way that
um it's a big yes and it's a big
absolutely and it's a subversion of um
the stories that are usually the ones
told. It's the stories of, you know, the
politicians and the boycots and the
international reaction, but it's these
untold stories of black women
um the that are sort of really um
emphasized here. And then I've just got
some notes and then I'll finish up now.
Um and for me, when I think of examples,
I like to just go with motifs. Love a
good motif. Um love the secondhand car
thing. You know, I like to bring in
those letters that Mr. Hunt mentioned.
You've got to talk about the fact that
it's nonlinear. It's it jumps back and
forth constantly.
And I've also got here one last thing.
Um Oh, the motif of the three
girlfriends, the part one, part two,
part three. You know, the awkward
What's the Yeah, the chapter thing. Um
that little motif is really weird
because it's like, why are you talking
about your high school girlfriends? I
don't care. Tell me about South Africa.
You know, you're born a crime. Give me
the gritty stuff. Give me the real. I
think it's to humanize the fact that
everyone living under oppression is
still just like trying to find a
girlfriend. Like they're just trying to
find a boyfriend. Like they just want to
go out for dinner and get a rose and go
to the dance. It's to humanize someone
like Trevor and Patricia where we're
like, "Oh, those poor black people. Oh,
they're so oppressed." No. And yes,
they're just people. and we cannot begin
to stereotype them and and look at them
as as tokens of, you know, um saving
these poor South Africans. Um and then
lastly, it's a big yes. And um it's
about a radical subversion of the usual
stories being told and then I might, you
know, use a few motifs there, but I
don't know how you disagree. Give it a
go, Mazro.
>> I'll say I'll I'll tell you how we
disagree. Um, no. And this is great
because I actually sent Miss Hosking
like and like we're both super feminist.
We are. Okay. So, this is this is why
this is interesting. Um, there are lots
of bits to this question. Okay. And I
think that's what Mr. Hunt's saying like
that deceptiveness of it. Okay. There's
lots of bits and you've got to not get
distracted by one bit and let that take
you down a path where you don't consider
the other bits. Okay, there is a quote
that is important. There is a quote.
Where's the quote from? Who's it about?
What's the context? yada yada yada.
Okay. Um then there's the experiences
and hardships of women.
That part is something to be
considering. We've got the fact that
that is the heart of the story, but not
just the heart of the story of South
Africa. Okay? It's not just the heart of
his story as his memoir, but his story
about South Africa. So all of Plus,
yeah, do you agree? So there are so many
parts to consider. Um now I I was
listening, but because there were so
many parts, um I really needed to make a
couple of notes. Um the things that I
would say are
um the experiences and hardships of
women are the hardest story. Um look,
not all women, but certainly Patricia
and colored or black women, women of
color. Okay, the the quote is to do with
um sorry, these are very disjointed
notes. This is what happens when I don't
have a pen. The girl Trevor tries to
take out, but he can't speak her
language. I feel like that's from Is
that where that quote's from? Okay. Girls,
Girls,
>> women like to be noticed. Don't just see
me when you need. It is her, but it's in
the context of that chapter, I think.
Okay. So, this idea of she is pretty.
>> Folks, we're losing a little bit of focus.
focus.
>> She is pretty. He wants to take her out,
but he can't. He doesn't even realize
that she speaks another language. And I
think that's where Miss Hosking is also
talking about these girls, particularly
black girls in South Africa. You are
like in terms of the rung in that
society, you're at the bottom. Okay. Um
but but okay, the Africana police
officer when Patricia tries to report
like I want to report a crime my husband
you know who hit you my husband like
your husband and the Africana police
officer and you know he's an Africana
only because if you listen to it he does
an Africana accent. Uh he says what did
you say? Like what did you do? And the
implication from a white police officer
are suffering too. Okay? And it doesn't
say black women, women of color. It just
says women. However, is there enough for
us to talk about that? There is also the
idea of the exotic birds quote. It is
not encouraged for women to be
independent. So that is absolutely an
experience and a hardship of women being
a problem. Um there is also the mothers
and their pain losing their sons. They
talk about what they pray for and it's
like their sons coming home. All right.
So certainly there is this idea of it
being the heart and something that
drives it. But is it everything? No. My
however and I don't think this is
tokenistic. The hardships and
experiences of people in South Africa,
black people in general. Okay. So, think
about the Black Hulk and Trevor talks
about how if you can't speak English
that that can be the difference between
if you're in the dock, the difference
between you getting off with community
service and going to jail. And what
happens to the Black Hulk? No one speaks
his language. He can't speak English.
And this poor man is his experiences and
hardships in South Africa. He's going to
suffer. And Trevor is the only one.
Trevor gets out of jail because he has
English because he has well his mother
in his corner his mother gives him the
tools. So you can keep returning to the
idea of women but certainly and that's
just very minimal notes.
I would I would say yeah all all black
and colored people in South Africa are
experiencing hardship and suffering
because that in South Africa part is
really important. Okay. So that's where
we go with like the yes and or in a
little bit of yes but okay it's not just women.
women.
>> Can't believe I say that.
>> Okay, I'm going to waffle my way through this
this
>> I don't agree.
I don't agree >> because
>> because
functionally for me if we look at the
word heart we can take it to mean two
different things. We can mean the
emotional heart of the story which is
how Miss Hoskins come at it or we can
talk about the sort of the narrative
structural heart of the story which is
how I'm going to look at it. To me this
is fundamentally a story about South
Africa more than it's about Trevor Noah.
So if we discount Trevor No and his
mother to an extent, their experiences
being representative of the experiences
of those kinds of people in South
Africa, we then need to ask ourselves
how do those people get to that point
that they experience South Africa in
that particular way. And this is
something again I'm going to disagree
with Miss Hoskin said that these systems
are easily dismantled. They're not
easily dismantled. That's the whole
point of the memoir.
>> They can be
>> they can be but it takes years and years
and years to unravel them. And the main
point of born a crime to me is that it
one hand it's saying that racism is one
of the stupidest, most illogical,
dumbest things you can do. To dislike
someone just based on the color of their
skin or they look different to you is
idiotic. And humans naturally just
reject that theory.
But to create a system that upholds such
a stupid sort of thought requires an
unbelievable amount of bureaucracy and
complexity that ultimately is really
really really really hard to undo.
So because of that one of the key things
that apathide did was create hierarchies.
hierarchies.
Hierarchies amongst the tribes of
Africa, hierarchies amongst men and women.
women.
So for my mind the experiences and
hardships of women in Noah's story are
central but as a deference of apartheid
thought which elevated men above women
to create further distinctions between
people in society. So for my mind I'm
saying that this is important. It's it's
important structurally as well because
we end on Patricia's shooting at the
hand of a man. We can't overlook that.
But the story also starts
not necessarily um the chapter run
there's a there's a sort of like sexual
threat undertone to the bus ride, but it
really does come down to a difference of
tribal belonging, which is why they get
have to jump from the car.
>> One sec. One sec. Well, cuz otherwise
I'm going to lose my train of thought.
>> There may not be time for rebuttal.
>> Um so I'm going to focus on establishing
like what Mr. Florence said how this
apartheid creates hierarchal systems
that make life hard for women. But then
focus in the next paragraph like but we
can also take into account like the
experiences of Africans and colored people.
people.
>> Yeah. Like the black hole would be good.
And then I would finish strong by sort
of saying that ultimately apartheid creates
creates
um systems of difference and hierarchy
that make life hard for anyone who is
outside the standard. And that's where
I'd go with this.
>> Yeah, we know that already.
>> We probably disagree.
disagree.
>> I Dr. Dick and I normally agree on everything.
>> Hey, I was trying to help you out here,
man. Um, the quote is what framed my
response initially, which is this sense
of don't just uh see me when you need
something. And it's I think it's
Patricia trying to teach Trevor about
how to relate to to women. That really
framed my response. I still disagree
with both, but that's okay. Um, but all
three could get an outstanding if you
wrote an essay with these guidelines.
Absolutely. So, this is fantastic. I I
hate that you don't think I'm correct,
but I really love that you guys can see
this. And I think yeah, the quote for me
was like, don't just see me when you
need something. It's sort of women are
people crazy. And
>> we are um teaching Trevor how to see
people to humanize blah blah blah blah
blah. However, great points. Great points.
points.
>> I think we're going to need to move on
now. Um
two final thoughts while panel is
changing over. Uh two final thoughts
from me.
Those are pretty high level answers. So
I did want to offer a different probably
simpler answer to the question as an
alternative. Um which is if you took say
the personal interpersonal societal
response you could go well look on a
personal level it's actually about
Trevor's kind of perspective on his
environment on an interpersonal level
yes it's about how Patricia interacted
with her environment and the way she
treated people like people treated her
as it is about women. on a larger
societal perspective, it probably is
more probably about how the structures
of apartheid worked and weren't
dismounted, things like that. So, you do
have the option of doing like a few
different ideas there, I think. And the
other thing I wanted to note um is a lot
of it's about the strength of women and
the amazing things that they do in
response to the hardships they
experience as well, which I think is a
good thing to be thinking about, too.
But thank you very much, the three of
I think this will be our last topic for
today before some kind of Q&A and
So I might have to pick from my
selection. How does topic three actually look?
Uh the role of faith. We could do the
role of faith or we could do our
environment shapes our identity.
I'll let the panel decide. You'd like to
know our environment shapes identity or
the role of faith,
>> All right, I'm picking the how question.
So, if God is with me, who can be
against me? How does Trevor Noah How
does Noah explore the role of faith in
the lives of South African people?
Bearing in mind that it does not say
religious faith. It just says faith. All
right, I'm going to give you a quicky
time limit here. You've got 60 seconds.
[Music]
Heat. Heat.
3 2 1 Chuck Norris says, "Let's talk."
No special move for Chuck Norris. Just
the existence of Chuck Norris really.
He is in himself everything and always.
Um Oh,
I have the mic as well. Who would like
to start? >> Mr.
>> Mr.
Thank you.
>> Thank you.
>> Thanks. First thing I want to say is
obviously we only had 60 seconds and
this is a really challenging prompt. I
think that a lot of people if we're
honest in here would avoid and do the
other one. But um it's a how question.
You know it's about faith. Um I would
just to break this down into three
parts. I would look at faith in three
different ways. I would look at um
religious faith and that would be most obviously
obviously
um explored through Patricia through how
she teaches Trevor Noah, you know, in
his life. Um
I would for me so I would look at this
idea of of her teachings to him uh and
how that establishes his childhood. I'd
probably do it to be honest in like
order of the text. I then look at
Trevanoa himself deciding to abandon
that faith. And not only does he abandon
religious faith, but at some points in
the text, he actually abandons faith of
even a brighter future. I mean, let's
look at his journey into the ghetto. Um,
and he pretty much rejects society,
doesn't he? He rebelss. He becomes a
petty criminal. And really at that
point, he doesn't have faith in any kind
of system. he only is living um and
being trapped in this uh system. Um in
that paragraph, I'd also be able to
explore other kind of underclass
elements in the text. So I might look at
the Hulk or other characters who are on
the peripheries that they they don't
have faith in a system that works for
them. So I've gone faith, I've gone lack
of faith, and then eventually I'm going
to go for like faith in a brighter
future or faith in change. Now that
would be I would have to cover the idea
of Patricia and her miraculous survival
um and how even this doctor um
says it's a miracle. So there's this
idea that there is faith in something um
in something greater and for for Trevor
Noah he never becomes religious and yet
he does have some kind of salvation.
He's able to support his mother out of
that. Um, I would try and come up with,
if I had a bit more time to plan,
probably some other um, examples of how
Trevor takes, you know, his very
negative situation and turns it
positive. Um, that's pretty that's
easily anywhere the structure I'd go
with. I'm going to pass the mic now.
>> Just before Miss starts, I wanted to
note a that was awesome under 60 seconds
time. Well done. But also B I think
there's a lesson in that um which is all
of us very easily hamstring ourselves or
lock ourselves into ideas through the
way we choose to interpret words and the
word like faith particularly in a book
that has a very heavy focus on
Christianity. It's very easy to go, ah,
I have to talk about religion. It's not
what the topic actually said. And
there's so much freedom in going, how
can I interpret the word faith? How can
I think about that word? Which is also
true for the other parts of these texts,
the other topics we've looked at today.
Um, because when you do step outside
that word and you think about what it
can mean from different perspectives,
you get a much richer and broader
conversation about the text than you
would get if you just talked about
Christianity or perhaps cultural tribal
perspectives in South Africa or
something like that. really really
important and very valuable lesson.
Thank you Mr. Babage. Big round of applause.
applause.
And same take us away.
>> Yeah. So my stomach sank when this topic
came on the board because like I hate
talking about religion. Um and I don't
want to write born a crime essays on
religion. But then as Mr. Hunt just
said, I thought, oh, hang on a minute.
It all comes down to how I'm going to
interpret the topic. And so the key word
in the prompt here, how does Noah
explore the role of faith? So role of
faith is the is the key thing there. And
I interpreted the role of faith as like
the role of hope. Yeah. Like faith in
you know that there's a better future,
hope for the future. So that's kind of
how I started off and then that made me
feel a little bit better about this
topic that I had to plan in 60 seconds.
Um, my go-to when I'm under pressure,
when I've got a room full of all of you
staring at me and only 60 seconds on the
clock, my fall back is causes,
consequences. Um, this is a how
question. So, it's not going to be
causes, consequences, exceptions because
I'm not going to challenge the topic.
It's a direct question. So, I'm going to
go like a causes, consequences extension.
extension.
So, cause my cause paragraph, as Mr.
Florence kind of said before is always
starting by looking at the society
looking at the system apartheid
post-aparttheide and why there was this
environment that people had to rebel
against or that was hard for women or in
this case where maybe people don't have
faith or where people's faith is shaken.
So what's the initial
problem is the problem is always this
apartheid post-aparttheide South African
society that really provided hardships
for people and therefore tested their
faith. Um so then the consequence the
sort of initial consequence is similar
to what Mr. Babage said that people kind
of lose their faith they lose their hope
for the future. And I was also really
thinking about um like the Cheese Boys
chapter and Trevor Noah when he finishes
school and he's just kind of sitting
around and hustling and not really doing
anything. Um talks about that sort of
neverending cycle, the hamster wheel
where you're just going around and
around and never really getting
anywhere. Um and then my sort of um
extension is would be something built
around Patricia where I would use the
quote um that her faith in religion and
her her strength in general um and her
hope for a better future where you know
Trev like why she names him Trevor. She
wants him to be beholden to know fate.
She wants him to know that there's a
world outside the ghetto. So her faith
that there is something more um is you
know that what what would then be the
focus of that final paragraph um that
the role of faith is what helps
you to succeed and help you to overcome
the difficulties of apartheite I think
is sort of somewhere where my contention
would be. It's also a how question. So I
would really try to focus on what are
some of those construction elements in
each paragraph. Um so maybe things like
the book ending both of you know chapter
one and the final chapter really focus
on awful violent incidents. Um there's
like that looming threat of Abel all who
sort of slowly revealed all throughout
the text which is sort of in that first
body paragraph about what was the
problem? Why was life so hard that
people didn't have faith? Um, I would
look at some of the um the imagery and
the figurative language like the hamster
wheel or the black tax or um you know
some of the things that he says in that
even the cheese boy little thing um in
that second body paragraph. And then I
would look at um the you know the book
ending as well of um anecdotes about his
mom. the d the book is dedicated to her.
You know, Abel has this looming
presence, but she's really at the heart
of the novel novel memoir. Um, and you
know, the way that it's kind of
structured around her teaching to Trevor
is probably how I would deal with the
how issue.
>> Um, or all right, lucky last. Um, look,
a lot of the things that I probably
would also say have probably been said.
Um, but if I was thinking about it when
I read that quote, my immediate thought
was where from the text does it take
place? And I've had Mr. Papalus confirm
that it's the the last part of the book
where um she's in the hospital bed and
she's talking to Trevor. Um, and the
line that follows after that is the
joke, you know, about him being the best
looking in the family and God gave me
the son, sorry, who was able to pay for
the hospital bills. Um so in terms of a
how question I definitely think I mean
you have to talk about humor at some
point in this text and I think um his
humorous stories and humorous anecdotes
and the way he talks about his
relationship with his mom um is how for
me when I'm thinking about this text is
how she like has instilled a sense of
faith in him that he can escape the
rigid I guess um structure of apartheid
and how he can kind of um get out of the
the poverty cycle and the black attacks.
Um, and humor in that sense really
toughened him up to be able to do that.
Um, she has faith in her son to live the
life she wanted for him and and how she
raised him. Um, that's probably the last
thing I talk about. Um, I'm going back
to the first thing which I probably
should have started with, so apologies.
Um I think in terms of how again the
prefaces here could be important in
terms of the the lives of South African
people, we get a lot of context about
that through um the prefaces and then
almost immediately in the anecdotes or
vignettes that he provides. He shows how
hard it is to have faith in a system
that is so flawed as a black or colored
person in apartheid and post-apartid
South Africa. So, I definitely think you
could talk about um yeah, the prefaces
and how they kind of contrast those
ideas. And that's pretty much all I
really had. >> Sorry.
>> Sorry.
>> Just for a contrast, I'll play personal
interpersonal societal again and I'll go
all right. What is the role of faith in
personal life? I think Noah has a
tremendous amount of faith in himself um
and self-belief. if he thinks he can
overcome problems that otherwise, you
know, would probably stop people. Um,
and sometimes it's for the better and
sometimes it's for the worse. But he has
a lot of faith in himself. Um, when I
think about kind of the way that people
interact in the book and the kind of
faith they have, often it is in in women
in this story. It's it's the faith that
we have in women to be able to help us
through challenging times because the
men in this story are not helpful. Um,
and and per except perhaps
theoretically, Robert. Um and in terms
of like a larger societal conversation
then you can have that big religious
conversation or cultural conversation
about some of the cultural principles
and values that kind of underpin the
text. However, we are about to wrap up.
Um in this slideshow there are some more
topics available. In fact there are a
lot more topics available. Um but I like
to leave the last part of this session
for about 5 minutes of just kind of some
general big picture questions and then
we'll wrap up. Um, so if you do have a
particularly general pressing question,
I'm going to get you to answer it and
ask it in a second. But before you do,
we got to do a couple of thank yous, I
think, just so the teacher can go home
if they want to as well. Um, so big
thank you for every single teacher on
Thank you so much for giving up your
time. It is Wednesday. If you're
anything like me, you're very tired of a
large pile of mark if you're here
anyway. So, thank you very much for
being here. It is not possible without
you. Secondly, to our wonderful AV team
who come in early and stay late and set
this whole thing up for us and make sure
the people who couldn't be here today
will still get to experience it. Big
Thirdly, as much as I do enjoy the sound
of my own voice, it is a lot better to
have all of you here to hear it. So,
thank you for coming today and taking
the time out of your busy schedule to
have a go at taking on something harder
and to learn a little bit more. Well
done you. And of course, finally, we
couldn't be here without the wonderful
Trevor Noah, who gave us a fantastic
book to talk about today. So, thank you
to Mr. Trevor Noah for your wonderful achievements.
achievements.
All righty. If you would now like to go
cuz you don't have any questions and
you'd like to head off, you're more than
welcome to. We'll do some quick Q&A in
Thank you. Is that your first time?
Yeah, it was time.
>> No, but it's like it's 60 seconds. It's
like impossible, but then like 5 minutes
later, you're like, okay,
>> it's the way.
>> Yeah. Well, I said, guys, can I please go?
go?
>> But then you said nothing. I was going
>> Yeah, I I can ro if you like.
>> Is it Is this thing on?
>> That one is
>> Yeah. Uh it was
>> Oh yeah.
>> All right, folks. If we do have some
questions, Mr. Babage is going to come
up and bring the mic to you so you can
ask your questions. Everyone can hear
them. Um,
>> unless you just want to yell them out.
Um, we're all here to answer a few
questions. So, pop your hand if you got
>> Hello. Hi. Um for one of the topics it
was a do you ask question for topic two
I think
>> u one of the teachers do you agree
>> yeah the do you agree question one of
the teachers discussed how you can like
100% agree with this topic but I've also
been taught contrastingly where I should
follow like a 80/20 rule where I should
agree and I also should disagree when
I'm presented a like do you ask do you
agree question so I just wanted to get
like more clarification on that
>> that's okay am I Can I answer that one?
All right. So, my answer is multi-art. I
think that when you get a do you agree
question, one of the most
straightforward answers is to say I
don't entirely agree and here are some
exceptions that show that it's not
always true. I think that answer works
quite well most of the time, like I'd
say 90% of the time. And it gives you
the opportunity cuz the rubric is going
to say you need to present multiple
interpretations. And so showing some
kind of exceptions or challenge in some
way is you presenting a different
interpretation. So, I think it makes a
lot of sense to usually say I don't
entirely agree. I would probably almost
never say I don't agree. Um, simply
because in saying I don't agree, you
might actually ignore the prompt
potentially, which can be really risky.
Um, I think there are times where you
can say I do definitely completely agree
so long as the reason that you agree is
more than one that you've got different
kind of ideas coming out, different
reasons why I agree in this way for this
reason. I agree in this way for this
reason. I agree in this way for this
reason. The challenge with that answer
is that it's very hard to come up with
different ideas that are all ultimately
leading to the same place. And so if you
have that thought in mind and you have
enough nuance in each idea to make it
work, yes, I'd say you can do it. I'd
say it's very very hard. I would mostly
advise against it. I would largely
recommend that you say I partially or or
mostly agree or to some extent agree
tends to work a little bit better. But
what I would also say is that one of the
advantages of doing that is if you get a discuss question, discuss questions tend
discuss question, discuss questions tend to require you to only partially agree
to require you to only partially agree anyway. And so if you're kind of always
anyway. And so if you're kind of always practicing that kind of skill, you're
practicing that kind of skill, you're setting yourself up for multiple kind of
setting yourself up for multiple kind of options, which I I like I like
options, which I I like I like efficiency. So I think that's efficient.
efficiency. So I think that's efficient. Um that's kind of I think a reasonable
Um that's kind of I think a reasonable answer.
answer. >> Can I add to that
>> Can I add to that >> please?
>> please? >> I resisted interrupting for the whole
>> I resisted interrupting for the whole lecture. Can I just say
lecture. Can I just say um I just wanted to touch on you said um
um I just wanted to touch on you said um I should agree and I should disagree.
I should agree and I should disagree. Try not to think of it as agreeing and
Try not to think of it as agreeing and disagreeing. Try to think of it as
disagreeing. Try to think of it as forming a contention that has a couple
forming a contention that has a couple of parts and then you are agreeing with
of parts and then you are agreeing with your contention because you don't want
your contention because you don't want to contradict yourself. But further to
to contradict yourself. But further to to what you said there, if you are doing
to what you said there, if you are doing an agree and you can't think of how to
an agree and you can't think of how to do something sort of as a second prong,
do something sort of as a second prong, do an I agree and it leads to. So like a
do an I agree and it leads to. So like a the second part of it is well yes I
the second part of it is well yes I agree but there's a particular outcome
agree but there's a particular outcome that I want to focus towards or lead to.
that I want to focus towards or lead to. Would you say that would be
Would you say that would be >> I think that's really fair. Yeah. I the
>> I think that's really fair. Yeah. I the one last thing I would note is that one
one last thing I would note is that one of the things I look for in a topic is
of the things I look for in a topic is if I get presented with absolutes like
if I get presented with absolutes like it is it must be
it is it must be >> it's never it's always
>> it's never it's always >> it's the heart everyone for me and maybe
>> it's the heart everyone for me and maybe it's the philosophy teacher me it's more
it's the philosophy teacher me it's more general thing that's a red flag that
general thing that's a red flag that makes me go uh it probably isn't that
makes me go uh it probably isn't that there probably is some kind of exception
there probably is some kind of exception book somewhere um I'm sure I can find a
book somewhere um I'm sure I can find a third paragraph that goes differently
third paragraph that goes differently and I probably should aim to try to find
and I probably should aim to try to find it um because that would be useful.
it um because that would be useful. Great question. Uh, next question.
Great question. Uh, next question. Vincent up front.
Vincent up front. >> Hi.
>> Hi. >> Uh, also a question about this topic.
>> Uh, also a question about this topic. So, I'm wondering if like uh because for
So, I'm wondering if like uh because for me my original plan for during the one
me my original plan for during the one minute is agreed agree disagree and my
minute is agreed agree disagree and my disagree part is uh I write the rebel
disagree part is uh I write the rebel rebellion works. It's like cuz like
rebellion works. It's like cuz like during a part like Alex is ready start
during a part like Alex is ready start he mentioned that this in like in his
he mentioned that this in like in his township there's like some woman uh like
township there's like some woman uh like running uh chasing a man with like
running uh chasing a man with like boiling water or boiling oil. Yeah. So
boiling water or boiling oil. Yeah. So I'm wondering if that can be a part of
I'm wondering if that can be a part of disagree.
disagree. >> Oh I think I think that's an interesting
>> Oh I think I think that's an interesting one. So you're kind of arguing that um
one. So you're kind of arguing that um actually in that example it's the male
actually in that example it's the male hardship that's the actual center of
hardship that's the actual center of >> No male hardship. I know it's like a
>> No male hardship. I know it's like a it's been a woman is like rebelling like
it's been a woman is like rebelling like this is like a core spell like here.
this is like a core spell like here. >> Okay. Um
>> Okay. Um >> strength for women is what?
>> strength for women is what? >> Yeah, I think that's kind of the
>> Yeah, I think that's kind of the strength of women conversation. Yeah,
strength of women conversation. Yeah, >> I've talked about this a lot with my
>> I've talked about this a lot with my class. So um this idea that the the
class. So um this idea that the the women are
women are um oppressed even more so than than
um oppressed even more so than than others. But there's also the idea that
others. But there's also the idea that the men are trying to control them
the men are trying to control them because they've got no control over
because they've got no control over other parts of their life. They've
other parts of their life. They've they're they're in poverty. It's hard to
they're they're in poverty. It's hard to break that cycle. That can lead to
break that cycle. That can lead to feelings of poor self-worth which can
feelings of poor self-worth which can lead to the alcoholism and the violence
lead to the alcoholism and the violence and so on. But Trevor says his life was
and so on. But Trevor says his life was run by women and his world was run by
run by women and his world was run by women. So, I've got the the wondering if
women. So, I've got the the wondering if the women kind of let it go for a time,
the women kind of let it go for a time, but underneath they are the the backbone
but underneath they are the the backbone and they have the strength. This is
and they have the strength. This is playing up.
playing up. >> It's based on how much you're speaking
>> It's based on how much you're speaking into it, so speak louder.
into it, so speak louder. >> Can't do it without.
>> Can't do it without. >> Yes.
>> Yes. um they have the strength to fight back
um they have the strength to fight back if and when necessary,
if and when necessary, >> but they choose not to most of the time
>> but they choose not to most of the time because they know that they need to
because they know that they need to allow
allow the men in their lives to have some
the men in their lives to have some feeling of ownership. Now, someone might
feeling of ownership. Now, someone might dispute that.
dispute that. >> That's a that's an idea talking about.
>> That's a that's an idea talking about. Yeah, cuz I I remember also there's like
Yeah, cuz I I remember also there's like a part he's mentioning that women are
a part he's mentioning that women are like the force at home, but like they're
like the force at home, but like they're trying to pretend to be weak of men
trying to pretend to be weak of men because to make sure the man's
because to make sure the man's reputation or something
reputation or something >> that probably represents, I'd say, a
>> that probably represents, I'd say, a hardship. It would be a good way of
hardship. It would be a good way of expressing that one. Um, great
expressing that one. Um, great questions. We're going to Oh, Mr. Sorry.
questions. We're going to Oh, Mr. Sorry. >> Be careful jumping on one or two small
>> Be careful jumping on one or two small examples and using them to say that the
examples and using them to say that the majority is incorrect.
majority is incorrect. Yeah, good for an exceptions paragraph,
Yeah, good for an exceptions paragraph, but not the whole point.
but not the whole point. >> Yes, there's not exceptions there.
>> Yes, there's not exceptions there. >> Next question.
>> Next question. >> Um, so with how questions just in
>> Um, so with how questions just in general like um for a contention, would
general like um for a contention, would you like list your would you write your
you like list your would you write your idea and would you list all the
idea and would you list all the different ways he does it like blah blah
different ways he does it like blah blah blah blah blah by the use of anecdotes,
blah blah blah by the use of anecdotes, imagery and then so on? Like how would
imagery and then so on? Like how would you actually frame a contention with a
you actually frame a contention with a how question? I think there are lots of
how question? I think there are lots of >> it's hard to talk about how questions
>> it's hard to talk about how questions without ending up kind of having lots of
without ending up kind of having lots of different ways of thinking about it.
different ways of thinking about it. Like I know one of the things that I
Like I know one of the things that I think about when I think about how
think about when I think about how questions is unless you are a strong
questions is unless you are a strong media student making your essay about
media student making your essay about literature student probably in this case
literature student probably in this case I was thinking more of something
I was thinking more of something boulevard making your essay about these
boulevard making your essay about these are the the structural devices that will
are the the structural devices that will drive the essay rather than here are the
drive the essay rather than here are the ideas that will drive the essay is quite
ideas that will drive the essay is quite hard. And I know in the way that I teach
hard. And I know in the way that I teach this book at least, I focus very heavily
this book at least, I focus very heavily um on individual moments in the story
um on individual moments in the story around well that's a really interesting
around well that's a really interesting metaphor or that's a really interesting
metaphor or that's a really interesting historical illusion or that's a really
historical illusion or that's a really interesting religious moment or that's a
interesting religious moment or that's a really interesting symbol or motif
really interesting symbol or motif that's running through the story. And I
that's running through the story. And I would use those as part of an example
would use those as part of an example rather than making it the whole
rather than making it the whole paragraph. Um, there might be times
paragraph. Um, there might be times where I might go, actually, my whole
where I might go, actually, my whole paragraph is about how it's a a complex
paragraph is about how it's a a complex kind of non-cronological narrative or
kind of non-cronological narrative or how it's broken up into youth versus
how it's broken up into youth versus adolescence versus early adulthood and
adolescence versus early adulthood and those kinds of ideas. A lot of the times
those kinds of ideas. A lot of the times I think it's really hard to build a
I think it's really hard to build a whole paragraph around that. And so, if
whole paragraph around that. And so, if you are going to do something like that,
you are going to do something like that, I think you need more than one idea to
I think you need more than one idea to go in each paragraph that would be like
go in each paragraph that would be like that. And I I do think it's a little
that. And I I do think it's a little risky. I think the only way you can
risky. I think the only way you can although there's never absolut
although there's never absolut probably probably the the one key device
probably probably the the one key device that you could maybe do is humor um
that you could maybe do is humor um because this is a really tragic story um
because this is a really tragic story um about a really difficult upbringing but
about a really difficult upbringing but the whole story is largely told in a
the whole story is largely told in a really humorous way. So with that how
really humorous way. So with that how topic that we looked at today um about
topic that we looked at today um about the role of faith my contention in the
the role of faith my contention in the introduction would probably just be
introduction would probably just be around what you know um what is the role
around what you know um what is the role like what am I defining the role of
like what am I defining the role of faith as what is it that Noah is trying
faith as what is it that Noah is trying to say about faith in for the lives of
to say about faith in for the lives of people in South Africa that would be my
people in South Africa that would be my contention like his overall message
contention like his overall message about faith you could potentially say
about faith you could potentially say like through the use of the humorous
like through the use of the humorous tone throughout or something like that.
tone throughout or something like that. But yeah, otherwise I would just bring
But yeah, otherwise I would just bring it into
it into >> then the key point would be like the
>> then the key point would be like the idea is made more prominent through that
idea is made more prominent through that technique, not the technique is the
technique, not the technique is the point.
point. >> Yeah.
>> Yeah. >> Can I just have to list the things in
>> Can I just have to list the things in your content?
your content? >> Yes. Yeah.
>> Yes. Yeah. >> So can you just like
>> So can you just like what's the topic about?
what's the topic about? >> The topic is about the role of faith,
>> The topic is about the role of faith, not about how.
not about how. >> Yeah. So your introduction, your
>> Yeah. So your introduction, your contention, your paragraphs are framed
contention, your paragraphs are framed around your arguments in response to the
around your arguments in response to the role of faith in your body paragraph.
role of faith in your body paragraph. All the how means is you should be
All the how means is you should be talking about construction in every
talking about construction in every single essay.
single essay. >> That's my rule.
>> That's my rule. >> How just means
>> How just means >> all questions are how questions.
>> all questions are how questions. >> Dial.
>> Dial. Okay.
Okay. >> Yeah. If every example you've got is
>> Yeah. If every example you've got is like a quote plus a literary device that
like a quote plus a literary device that relates to the quote, you're set. You're
relates to the quote, you're set. You're going to be fine. Which is usually the
going to be fine. Which is usually the way I teach it. It works quite well.
way I teach it. It works quite well. From an exam assessor's point of view,
From an exam assessor's point of view, they hate introductions that are lists.
they hate introductions that are lists. >> Okay? Just tell me what you're going to
>> Okay? Just tell me what you're going to argue and get on with it. Don't tell me
argue and get on with it. Don't tell me it's this and this and this and this and
it's this and this and this and this and this. Just get on with it.
this. Just get on with it. >> Beautiful. I think that gets us there.
>> Beautiful. I think that gets us there. Uh, any more questions? We got another
Uh, any more questions? We got another one from Carrie in the middle. um
one from Carrie in the middle. um how do you explore how do you explain
how do you explore how do you explain the nonlinear structure in a meaningful
the nonlinear structure in a meaningful way?
way? >> So the questions about the nonlinear
>> So the questions about the nonlinear structure and how to explore it in a
structure and how to explore it in a meaningful way. Um that's a good
meaningful way. Um that's a good question. The short answer I have to
question. The short answer I have to that is I'm not 100% sure there is a
that is I'm not 100% sure there is a meaningful way to talk about it. Um I
meaningful way to talk about it. Um I don't think it necessarily is. So here's
don't think it necessarily is. So here's my thing about it being a nonlinear
my thing about it being a nonlinear structure. I'm not 100% convinced it
structure. I'm not 100% convinced it entirely is. I think that it's a
entirely is. I think that it's a three-part story and the first part is
three-part story and the first part is his early childhood, the second part is
his early childhood, the second part is his high school years and the third part
his high school years and the third part is his um early adolescence kind of not
is his um early adolescence kind of not going to uni and instead spending time
going to uni and instead spending time with Alex. That doesn't sound nonlinear
with Alex. That doesn't sound nonlinear to me,
to me, >> but it's nonlinear within
>> but it's nonlinear within >> but within the complex construct that it
>> but within the complex construct that it is a little bit nonlinear. Um the fact
is a little bit nonlinear. Um the fact that he's chosen to do that, I think the
that he's chosen to do that, I think the only way that I would think about it
only way that I would think about it that could be potentially relevant is
that could be potentially relevant is that maybe he's doing that in order to
that maybe he's doing that in order to highlight a particular emotional idea or
highlight a particular emotional idea or particular concept where he picks
particular concept where he picks different moments from her life to do
different moments from her life to do that. Um, but I think it's pretty niche
that. Um, but I think it's pretty niche and I'm not 100% convinced it's super
and I'm not 100% convinced it's super useful. Um, I haven't seen anybody write
useful. Um, I haven't seen anybody write on it particularly well or productively.
on it particularly well or productively. So, I'm I'm not sold on it myself. Was
So, I'm I'm not sold on it myself. Was there any disagreement from the
there any disagreement from the >> If I was going to write about the
>> If I was going to write about the nonlinear part of it, there's other
nonlinear part of it, there's other things you can write about structurally,
things you can write about structurally, but if you were to write about that, it
but if you were to write about that, it connects quite well with the role of
connects quite well with the role of memory and how he tells stories about
memory and how he tells stories about memory because memory is fragmented and
memory because memory is fragmented and nonlinear, our own memories. So the
nonlinear, our own memories. So the structure of it actually does reflect
structure of it actually does reflect how we remember things. That that would
how we remember things. That that would probably be the only way if you wanted
probably be the only way if you wanted to write about it as a as its own thing.
to write about it as a as its own thing. Otherwise, I'd be looking at other
Otherwise, I'd be looking at other structural elements like which prefaces
structural elements like which prefaces and chapters are set up in what order
and chapters are set up in what order and why why is one particular chapter
and why why is one particular chapter wedged between two others? Is there any
wedged between two others? Is there any particular reason for that? And
particular reason for that? And >> also the smaller things. Why do cars
>> also the smaller things. Why do cars come up so much? Why does food come up
come up so much? Why does food come up so much? why, you know, those kinds of
so much? why, you know, those kinds of things as well are like nice, easier, I
things as well are like nice, easier, I think, how elements to talk about. I
think, how elements to talk about. I think we have time for maybe one more
think we have time for maybe one more question, but I wanted kind of a big
question, but I wanted kind of a big picturey type one. Has anyone got like a
picturey type one. Has anyone got like a a big question they think everyone needs
a big question they think everyone needs to hear about, or is it more of a like a
to hear about, or is it more of a like a for your teacher question, maybe?
for your teacher question, maybe? You got a thought?
You got a thought? >> Yeah. Where's that mic gone? Oh,
>> Yeah. Where's that mic gone? Oh, >> would you mind passing it over?
>> would you mind passing it over? >> It's on the mic. It goes
>> It's on the mic. It goes >> It goes on the thing. Otherwise, I have
>> It goes on the thing. Otherwise, I have to repeat the question.
to repeat the question. >> Okay. Since this is like the final
>> Okay. Since this is like the final question, we better make it worthwhile.
question, we better make it worthwhile. Um um you know how we had like a teacher
Um um you know how we had like a teacher who framed the response on the quote and
who framed the response on the quote and um I guess to my understanding, I feel
um I guess to my understanding, I feel like she kind of got off topic because
like she kind of got off topic because the um as the other teacher has said
the um as the other teacher has said that it was more like on the hardships
that it was more like on the hardships or how people has defined like the key
or how people has defined like the key terms. So if for example, if you did
terms. So if for example, if you did frame your response on like a particular
frame your response on like a particular key term, how far would you say it's
key term, how far would you say it's like off topic?
like off topic? Good question. I think there's two parts
Good question. I think there's two parts to that. I want to go back to the first
to that. I want to go back to the first part first, which is does my whole essay
part first, which is does my whole essay have to be about the quote?
have to be about the quote? >> And I think the answer to that question
>> And I think the answer to that question is no, it does not. It is an expectation
is no, it does not. It is an expectation if there is a quote, you need to find a
if there is a quote, you need to find a way to make it relevant, I would say, to
way to make it relevant, I would say, to at least one body paragraph. So, if I
at least one body paragraph. So, if I take was it topic one or two that you
take was it topic one or two that you were talking about?
were talking about? >> Um, that was two I think
>> Um, that was two I think >> the women one. So if I take a quote like
>> the women one. So if I take a quote like this, there's a really nice kind of I
this, there's a really nice kind of I guess kind of ideal
that kind of comes out of that particular um quote. There's a great
particular um quote. There's a great paragraph in the way that that that
paragraph in the way that that that women are valued in the story, but value
women are valued in the story, but value is not the only story of women in this
is not the only story of women in this story. And so I wouldn't want to make
story. And so I wouldn't want to make the whole essay about just that concept.
the whole essay about just that concept. And I also want to have opportunities,
And I also want to have opportunities, especially in a do you agree to go,
especially in a do you agree to go, well, maybe there's exceptions, maybe
well, maybe there's exceptions, maybe it's not always true. Um, and so maybe I
it's not always true. Um, and so maybe I want to challenge that that potentially
want to challenge that that potentially quote in some way and not always be
quote in some way and not always be focused on it. Um, I think it's
focused on it. Um, I think it's important to talk about the quote. I
important to talk about the quote. I don't think it's the only thing that you
don't think it's the only thing that you should do in your essay cuz it's not the
should do in your essay cuz it's not the only thing that's in the topic.
only thing that's in the topic. >> The quote gives you the challenge or the
>> The quote gives you the challenge or the >> I think that's true true that the the
>> I think that's true true that the the quote is always there to give you either
quote is always there to give you either a really interesting exception idea or a
a really interesting exception idea or a really clear interesting paragraph idea.
really clear interesting paragraph idea. And so one question I would ask when I
And so one question I would ask when I sit down for the sack or a practice sack
sit down for the sack or a practice sack is go what is an obvious paragraph that
is go what is an obvious paragraph that I can write that links to the idea
I can write that links to the idea that's implied in this quote and there
that's implied in this quote and there probably will be some kind of obvious
probably will be some kind of obvious idea there but that's one and then what
idea there but that's one and then what are my other two going to be? Does that
are my other two going to be? Does that make does that make sense? Do you think
make does that make sense? Do you think that answers your whole question? Only
that answers your whole question? Only part of your question
part of your question >> only part.
>> only part. >> What's the second part again? It's like
>> What's the second part again? It's like if you focused your essay on like a
if you focused your essay on like a particular key term, how far would you
particular key term, how far would you say you've gone off topic?
say you've gone off topic? >> I reckon it depends on which key term.
>> I reckon it depends on which key term. >> Yeah.
>> Yeah. >> What jumped out for me this topic was
>> What jumped out for me this topic was the heart.
the heart. >> And for me that's the the whole
>> And for me that's the the whole question. I know it's about the role of
question. I know it's about the role of women and their hardships, but it says
women and their hardships, but it says they are the heart of the story. And my
they are the heart of the story. And my first question was are they the heart of
first question was are they the heart of the story? or even is there a heart to
the story? or even is there a heart to the story?
the story? >> What does that actually mean? And I need
>> What does that actually mean? And I need to decide that in terms
and is there something else that needs exploring as alternative to that?
exploring as alternative to that? >> Yeah,
>> Yeah, >> I think that's true. Um, and look, I
>> I think that's true. Um, and look, I think if you look at this topic and go,
think if you look at this topic and go, well, there's three kind of key words
well, there's three kind of key words that I can play with, experiences,
that I can play with, experiences, hardships, and hard. I probably wouldn't
hardships, and hard. I probably wouldn't want that to be my answer because I
want that to be my answer because I think experiences and hardship are
think experiences and hardship are probably too connected. Um,
probably too connected. Um, but I think if you ignored experiences
but I think if you ignored experiences and hardship to only focus on heart, or
and hardship to only focus on heart, or you ignored heart to only focus on
you ignored heart to only focus on experiences and hardship, you probably
experiences and hardship, you probably are missing part of the question. Um,
are missing part of the question. Um, and you're trying to imagine there's a
and you're trying to imagine there's a heart to the question that isn't
heart to the question that isn't actually there cuz it's got more than
actually there cuz it's got more than one bit to it.
one bit to it. >> It's probably the way I would think
>> It's probably the way I would think about it. Do you reckon that answers
about it. Do you reckon that answers your question now?
your question now? >> Yes. Yes.
>> Yes. Yes. >> Perfect. All right. With that, I think
>> Perfect. All right. With that, I think we're going to call it a day. Thank you
we're going to call it a day. Thank you all for coming. If you have any further
all for coming. If you have any further questions, send them in like an email or
questions, send them in like an email or ask your teacher cuz we are all very
ask your teacher cuz we are all very helpful. So, please ask us questions.
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