This video provides a practical guide on how to write the critique section of an academic essay, focusing specifically on structuring the introduction, body, and conclusion when analyzing a research article.
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hi guys so this is a longer waited video
you guys have been asking me
how did the right top part of your
critique that means when you critique an article
article
how do you go about writing the critique
how do you well i think most of you guys
at least people in the uk have models
that have to do with critique in a
particular article
and then you have to do the right top
for the essay so this
particular video is dedicated to that at
least you guys chose you guys you guys voted
voted
and then we decided on this video so
if that sounds like what you're looking
for right now
definitely keep watching this so what i
am going to do is
put a link to the article the link
the link to the tool we're going to be
using in the description box all the
links will be
in the description box so make sure to
check it out so i have chosen this
particular article i know a lot of you
guys have been saying
i'll do an article on public health
doing management article
health care this um business something
guys let me address that here's the thing
thing
you need to understand that critiquing
analytical is the same thing no matter
what you've chosen
okay so no matter the
article you're critiquing the approach
is forever the same
it doesn't matter what tool you're using
remember i have done a video
previous videos actually not just one
now about three on critique in an
article so
the last very last video i mentioned
several tools that you can use aside cast
cast
well i love using cast because i find it really
really
encompassing i find it really
uncompassionate i feel like it has
almost everything that i need when i'm
critiquing high school so that's why i
use it but it depends on what your
school wants
or what you really desire from a
critique too
or i'm going to be using cast in this
video as well if you want me to use another
another
tool let me know and let me know what
tool you would like me to
use well make sure to check out previous videos
videos
i have explained fully how to critique
an article this particular part is
actually to
address that right of part so i'm not
going to go ahead and
critique the entire article man only
here today
but what i'm going to do is show you how
you can approach the introduction
do a brief write-up about one of the uh
sections on the cast tool that we're
critiquing and then
show you how you can do the
conclusion so that way we
i have you covered okay so basically i
have recovered so this is the article
it's about healthy eating and obesity
prevention for preschoolers
and it is a randomized control trial so
what i would do is when i go on the cast
page i'm going to keep click on the
checklist that is for
randomized control trials that's what
i'm going to use
to critique this particular article so
let's get to it so basically the article
is on
it's not it's not the randomized control
trials although is
prevention for preschoolers the
participants are actually the parents of
the preschoolers
to educate them and create interventions
and stuff for them so that they can
eventually access it
so you can go through the entire article
the link is in the description box and
make sure to check it out but right now
we'll go to the
to the tool let's go to the cast tool
i've already clicked on here
you know we have this casper randomized
control trial checklist it's newly
updated wow that's nice
so that's what i am going to use
the link is in the description box guys
so you can always
check it out guys uh before we go on i
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well so
let's get to it if we click on that
randomized control trial thing this is
what we have
let me let me maximize this okay so this
is what we have for the
randomized control trial checklist we
have all this
and uh you already know there are videos
i have done
videos on both qualitative and quantitative
quantitative
studies how to critique them so you can
make sure to check out those and how to
answer all these questions
but mainly like i said earlier what we
are focusing on is
how to do the right job that is the most
important part of this whole thing
how do you do the write-up i think
that's what confuses people
and let me put this there that once
we're done with this
i've already said i'm not doing the
entire thing i'm going to show you how to
to
but i'm not doing the entire thing if
you still need
more clarification if you still want me
to work with you
one-to-one the link to consultation
is in the description box just book an
appointment with me so that
i can also get you started
but that doesn't mean that i'm not going
to provide value in this video you
already know i'm going to provide value
even if you still want me to do it
one-to-one with you okay
so let's go ahead i'm going to be using
google docs to do geraito
i'm just it just makes it easier for me right
right
so we i already have the article remember
remember
this is the article and i have to write
an introduction for this
it's important to understand that for me
to write an introduction i need to
understand what the article is all about
obviously i've read tradition i know
that this article is trying to address
childhood obesity which is a growing
epidemic right now in the country
so that's what basically that's what my
introduction is going to be about it's
going to be about
the the problem
in the article and why i think it is an issue
issue
in this case why i think this is a
public health issue that is worth
looking into yeah
so those are the things that i am going
to address
so if i am to do the right talk now
let's see
let's load up the google docs so if i'm
to do the right talk
i would start by saying so we're going
to type this video is going to be long
of uh a
that means the right of your dream is a
critique of a randomized
sorry i'm going to agree with some
things he's a critic of a randomized
control trial
on uh rather buy
so i quote the authors
i put my citation there's cause there is
at all
on healthy eating
right first up so
now this is basically what the title is
this is basically what the whole thing
is all about so what do i
what do i what do i want to do from here
to assess rather
childhood obesity okay
so that's what the article is trying to
effectiveness okay so what i'm going to
do from here
let me i'll go ahead and talk a bit
about childhood obesity that way
i look like i know what i'm saying i
look like i know what i'm doing i'm
well-read i'm not i didn't just read the article
article
i read way beyond the article right
so i was going and write about childhood
obesity and present it as
let's just assume you know some of these
uh how do i first the other proceeds
one of the global public health challenges
sorry i'm going to activate something
public health challenges
because of our time okay one of the
global public
right so
i can't just leave yes this i still go
on a bit
further right just to at least
let's let's give it a bit of flesh so
the prevalence the current prevalence
um no let's do it this way over time
guys i'm writing this
from my head so it's uh this is me
putting myself on the spot i like to do
that a lot i think it kind of
tasks my brain yeah over time
the prevalence of but this fact
most of these facts are correct okay so
the prevalence of
11 million
within 40 years now that shows you that
it's a growing pandemic so we put we put
our reference there that would be
i got that stuff from what obesity dot org
org
that's the website now okay
so i'm just going to look at that it
depends on the type of citation you're
using or the type of
the type of reference and you're using
format of referencing so well am i
anyway sure
this is what i intend to do with this so
you can always
cite your reference right there and
remember i've done a video on how to use
mendeley that saves you time but because
i'm using google docs right now i can
access my mendeley
if i were to be using my microsoft
word then i will be able to access a
ball guys
make sure to check out that video it
would also help so
how to use mendelian will save you a lot
of time okay
so that being the case
i think it's 2021 there about that's
where i got this from
so i've shown that this is
is an epidemic it is quite alarm i can
go on and on about it a little bit
this is just to give you flesh and to
show that okay
there is an issue it is a problem and it is
is
there is a need to address it and that's
what this study has done
so i have some things jotted here
the rate of growth of this epidemic
square aluminium
overall the population right
everything to the overall health of the population